New Design

Hello everyone. After I travel a lot in blog, seeing a wonderful header blogger and makes me envy, makes me want to try a new things for my header and profile blog, so here it is..
I try to make it my ilustration on my own and it become like this :

Before :

(Sorry I already changed the header, it just my photo while I was on my rooftop)

After

Well, honestly I feel more statisfied about this design than before.
So, what do you think about it ?
Which one is better, before or after ?
I really need your opinion to build my blog become better.